Naming the work — Katherine Mahoney Ceramics
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What to call things, and why it decides who finds them

Of roughly forty products, one appears in Google's rankings. This page works through why, product by product, and what each one should be called instead.

Two names for every piece

Squarespace lets you set a second, hidden name for each product — the one Google reads, separate from the one on the page. They do different jobs, and using both means you never have to stuff search words into a name a person reads.

Layer
Who reads it
How it should sound
The name on the page
A person deciding whether to click
Clean and human
The hidden name
Google
Can carry "ceramic", "handmade", "Sydney"

On the page: Slim water jug in chalk

Hidden: Ceramic water jug — handmade in Sydney | Katherine Mahoney Ceramics

Two different ways a name can fail

These need opposite fixes, and getting them the wrong way round makes things worse.

Studio words

Skinny Pourer, Egg Body Pourer, Frilly Top Vase. Nobody types these. The fix is to replace the noun.

Words that are too broad

Vase, Plates, MUGS, Bottles. Everybody competes for these. The fix is to add a word, not simplify.

This is the one that's easy to get wrong. "Vase" is already an ordinary customer word and it ranks for nothing. Renaming Frilly Top Vase to just Vase would make it harder to find, not easier.

"Soap dish" works because it's two words naming one kind of object — specific enough that Google knows what it is, ordinary enough that people search it. Same shape as water jug, butter dish, spoon rest, bud vase, cake stand, herb stripper.

Four tests, in order

  1. Is the noun a word customers use? Jug yes. Pourer no.
  2. Is it specific enough to tell the object apart? Bud vase yes. Vase no.
  3. Does it say what it is before what it's like? Slim water jug, not Skinny Pourer.
  4. Would a stranger know what they were buying from the name alone?

Test two is the one most often missed — and it's the difference between a name that reads well and a name that gets found.

The jugs — the clearest single win

"Jug" isn't quite the right target. If they hold water — and a wide-lipped pourer surely does — the phrase people actually type is water jug.

What people typePer month
water jug4,400
jug2,900
jugs1,300
water jugs1,300
ceramic water jug170
Now
Suggested
Skinny Pourer
Slim water jug in [glaze]
Egg Body Pourer
Round water jug in [glaze]
Wide Top Pourer
Wide-lipped water jug in [glaze]
Carafe
Water carafe with cup lid

The carafe isn't a guess — "water carafe with cup lid" is the exact phrase somebody typed into your own site search.

The rest of the catalogue

Cups and mugs

There are five separate mug listings. They should be one listing with the glaze as a choice.

MUGS · Mugs · three slip-decorated listings
Mug in [glaze] — one listing
Beakers
Beaker in [glaze], or fold in as a variant
Tumblers
Tumbler in [glaze]

Plates and platters

Plates
Dinner plates in [glaze] — sizes as choices
Platters
Serving platter in [glaze]
Pedestal/Cake Plate — Large & Small
Cake stand in [glaze] — one listing, two sizes
Tapas Dish
Tapas plate in [glaze]

Bowls

After jugs, bowls are the thing people search your site for most — serving bowl, tall bowls, wool bowl, gold bowl all appear.

Everyday Bowl — Set of 4
Everyday bowls — set of four, [glaze]
Shallow Bowls
Shallow serving bowl in [glaze]
Chunky Bowls
Deep bowl in [glaze]
Aqua Bowl with Undulating Rim
Serving bowl with wavy rim — aqua
Pink Pedestal Bowl
Footed bowl in pink
Trio of Mini Dippers · Mini Dipper Set
Dipping bowls — set of three, [glaze] (merge)
Ramen Bowl
Keep the name — add "soup bowl" to the description

Ramen Bowl stays exactly as it is. It's plain, it's specific, and your own FAQ says it began with somebody asking for "the perfect soup bowl". Nineteen hundred people a month search that phrase — so it belongs in the description, not the title.

Vases — the biggest tidy-up

There are ten or more vase listings, several of them the same thing twice.

Vase
Tall vase in [glaze]
Large Vase · Large vase
Large vase in [glaze] — merge the two
Frilly Top Vase · Frilly Top Vase Small
Vase with frilled rim — one listing, two sizes
Sorbet Vase
Vase in sorbet glaze
Vase with pedestal
Footed vase in [glaze]
Tricolour & Ripple vases, large and small
One listing each, sizes as choices
3 Vases with Dimples
Dimpled vases — set of three
Bottles
Bud vases in [glaze]
Jar with Wiggly Handles — $350
Vase with wiggly handles — [glaze]

The $350 Jar with Wiggly Handles is the most expensive thing in the shop, and the word "Jar" may be costing it. Far more people search vase than jar. If it holds flowers, call it a vase.

Kitchen and home

Butter Dish — sold out
Lidded butter dish in [glaze], if it has a lid
Utensil Holder
Utensil pot in [glaze]
Juicer
Citrus juicer in [glaze]
Spoons
Ceramic spoons — set of [n]
Plant holder with gold lustre
Planter with gold lustre
Herb Stripper · Soap Dish
Leave both alone

One rule above all

Don't touch the soap dish name. It is the only thing on the site currently working. Adding a glaze word after it is safe; changing the object noun is not.

And while renaming — never write "sold out"

The same pass through the catalogue is the moment to change this. Around eighteen pieces are currently dead ends. The full argument is on the comparison page.

Your Plates page alone: 159 visits this year, 95% of them leaving straight away, because there is nothing to do there.

The order to do it in

  1. Merge the duplicates first. Five mug listings, two Large Vases, two dipper sets, two Frilly Tops. This shrinks the job before it starts.
  2. Rename the three jugs. Easiest term available and the fastest thing to measure.
  3. Restock and rename the butter dish.
  4. Bottles becomes bud vases, and reconsider Jar → Vase on the $350 piece.
  5. Everything else, in shop order.
  6. Replace every "Sold out" with the made-to-order line.
  7. Add the hidden names and product codes as a second pass — only 3 of 40 pieces have a code either, so it's the natural moment.

Two things to check with you

  • "Candles" — are you selling candles, or holders? Five people searched for a candle holder.
  • "Tea Time in Pink" — what's in the set? If there's a teapot or strainer in it, that connects straight to the largest piece of unmet demand we found.
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